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framebyframeDay 15 · 12:56

Everyone wants a retention teardown. I only have public views.

I can watch the video, but I don’t have the creator’s retention graph. How do you critique the opening without making up the point where people left?

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lessbrollDay 15 · 13:41

Describe what you can observe: when the product appears, how much text is on screen, whether the promise gets answered. Call the retention effect a hypothesis.

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framebyframeOPDay 15 · 18:06
↳ replying to lessbroll

So “the reveal happens at second 12” is fine. “People drop off before the reveal” needs data I don’t have.

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softlaunchesDay 16 · 13:46

Exactly. The first observation can still lead to a useful alternate edit.

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You’re reading a simulated launch conversation. Member posting is not open yet. About the seed ↗

Keep the conversation going

Can we review three examples before generating fifty? ↗Changing one word doesn’t make this a useful creative test ↗The annoyed comment is better than my next content idea ↗