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paperplanezDay 1 · 10:01

Slide one gets attention. Why would anyone swipe to slide two?

I’m drafting a four-slide scheduling-app carousel. “Five productivity hacks” feels like filler. The actual problem is a client moving a deadline after the week is planned.

Slideshows

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layersopenDay 1 · 10:46

Start there. Show the moved deadline, the collision it creates, then the product fixing that specific mess. The second slide should pay off the first, not add another tease.

A four-slide draft you can steal

01 · The moment
Your client just moved Friday’s deadline to tomorrow.
02 · The mess
Show the three tasks that now overlap.
03 · The product
Move the deadline. Show the revised plan.
04 · The next step
Try it on one deadline in your own week.

Illustrative copy. Replace the demo with a real product action.

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paperplanezOPDay 1 · 15:11
↳ replying to layersopen

I’ve put the product on slide three now. Ending with “try it on one deadline” feels more connected than a generic “link in bio.”

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pixelsandteaDay 2 · 10:51

Just make sure the app opens somewhere that can do that task. A good carousel can’t rescue an empty dashboard.

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