RepliedDay 28 · 17:18
The last slide just says “follow for more”. More what?
I’ll use “copy the four-slide outline” for this one. Asking for an account before showing the outline felt like a bait-and-switch.
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Started a threadDay 28 · 12:08
The last slide just says “follow for more”. More what?
The carousel teaches one product workflow, then ends with the most generic CTA I could write. I want an action that follows from what the reader just saw.
RepliedDay 22 · 15:32
Does this carousel make sense with the audio off?
I found the missing step immediately when I muted it. It’s one short label, not another whole slide.
Started a threadDay 22 · 10:22
Does this carousel make sense with the audio off?
The voiceover explains a step that never appears on the slides. I’m worried the visual version is now a collection of clues rather than a complete thought.
RepliedDay 16 · 13:46
My carousel makes a promise it never actually demonstrates
I’ll use a simple sample calendar and label it as an example. No need to dress it up as a customer story.
Started a threadDay 16 · 08:36
My carousel makes a promise it never actually demonstrates
It says the app makes planning easier. Every slide after that is still a benefit statement. I think I need one actual product moment in the middle.
RepliedDay 10 · 17:50
Looks great on my monitor. Unreadable on my phone.
I split one slide into two and removed the intro sentence. The screenshot finally has room to be useful.
Started a threadDay 10 · 12:40
Looks great on my monitor. Unreadable on my phone.
I keep solving this by making the font smaller so everything fits. The export looks tidy and then fails the most basic viewing test.
RepliedDay 4 · 16:04
slide-1, slide-2, slide-10. You can probably guess what happened next.
Added both. I’m also putting the caption version in the same handoff so it doesn’t get picked from an older message.
Started a threadDay 4 · 10:54
slide-1, slide-2, slide-10. You can probably guess what happened next.
The assets are fine. The order is not. I want a handoff that survives another tool sorting the folder differently.