framebyframeDay 9 · 11:10My demo starts with a feature list and I get bored editing it
There’s a real before-and-after buried twenty seconds in. I keep adding context before it because I’m worried the product won’t make sense.
Earlier from framebyframeTen accounts, one demo. Is that ten tests or one? ↗
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roughcutclubDay 9 · 11:55Move the visible problem to the front. Give the viewer just enough context to understand the change. If a feature matters, let it explain the result after we’ve seen why we care.
#1I cut the opening down to the messy state and one action. The feature names can live on the destination page.
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kevintriesDay 10 · 12:00Keep one version with a little more context too. “Shorter” isn’t the goal by itself; understandable is.
#3Related resourceRead the US launch walkthrough ↗
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