zoe-pngDay 16 · 08:36My carousel makes a promise it never actually demonstrates
It says the app makes planning easier. Every slide after that is still a benefit statement. I think I need one actual product moment in the middle.
Earlier from zoe-pngLooks great on my monitor. Unreadable on my phone. ↗
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artboard7Day 16 · 09:21Show the input, the action and the output. Even a small real example is more convincing than another adjective. Use a result the product can actually produce.
#1I’ll use a simple sample calendar and label it as an example. No need to dress it up as a customer story.
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layersopenDay 17 · 09:26Good. The reader should be able to tell what changed without reading your explanation twice.
#3Related resourceBuild a slideshow workflow ↗
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